Website/Online Store Copy Enhancements
-Tasked by the owner to improve and proof the sites’ headers and text
Original Header: Stardome light… Instantly transcend any space into a Galaxy!
Mine:Bring the night sky to you! Launch an epic, starry skyscape that transforms your space
Original:You can pick up your favorite colors by the smartphone app and get it next time easily among 300+ kinds of lighting effects. Choose between different dynamic effects or static effects according to your needs. Whatever you’re in the mood for, even turn the RGB Corner Floor Lamp into a modern nightlight by simply dimming the brightness for more ambient corner light. Enhance your bedroom decor, living room decor, game room or office decor with mesmerizing colors and effects. Enjoy the Premium RGB LED lights that are at least double brighter than other comparable RGB corner floor lamps.
Mine:Using the smartphone app, you can pick out your favorite colors and over 300+ lighting effects and easily save them for future use. Choose between multiple dynamic or static effects according to your needs. Whatever you’re in the mood for, even turn the RGB Corner Floor Lamp into a modern nightlight by simply dimming the brightness for more ambient corner light. Enhance your bedroom decor, living room decor, game room, or office decor with mesmerizing colors and effects. Enjoy the Premium RGB LED lights that are at least 2x brighter than other comparable RGB corner floor lamps!
Additional site header enhancements:
Original Header:The Perfect Baby Playpen
Mine:Meet The Baby’s New Favorite Place To Play
Original Header:Solar power is the number one source of renewable energy with no maintenance
Mine:Harness The Power Of The Sun… Light Your Perfect Outdoor Space With Renewable Energy!
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